On my peer review Tiffany revised my paper for me. What she said I needed to mostly work on was elborating more. She said that I had a good paper, but needed to fully analyze and explain my viewpoints. She also stated that some things in my paper I repeated and that I needed to revise those areas. In all her comments were very helpful. I will defintly look fully at what she suggested and decide if I would use it in my paper.
In my opinion my paper sounds alright. I defintly think I need to elaborate more and fully explain myself more. I also, think that I need to work mostly on getting the body of my paper to become more strong. Once, I fully analyze and add more of my opinions I believe tha the paper will be much better.
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